Thursday, 26 June 2014

Recount A time I was successful. 

WALT: Retell of a experience. 
WILF: Audience has all the information needed.

It was Friday night and Zeke and I were having so much fun playing Cars on the PSP. Dad crashed on the game then he told us to go to bed.  

1 comment:

  1. Wow Maxwell, that is a good time for when you were successful. I think all you need to work on is to put more information in your writing when your dad told you to go to sleep.